Not gonna lie, I was a little bit underwhelmed by this.
First the positives:
The Style and animation by itself is really good, the action scenes are amazing. The music score fits the tone. Some of the effects and lighting are very well done!
But there's some problems with the sound. Sometimes it doesn't fully work with what's shown on the screen. The amount of gasps the father makes is not fully shown through the movement. And that's not only for the father, other characters often sound like they've not been animated based of the audio, but instead sound like they've been dubbed over, sometimes the lipsync is a bit off, or they just don't move their mouth when making sounds (or the other way round), or the their expression does not feel right for the way they pronounce their line (like at 2:51). There are some scenes that could use some more sounds, for example: at 1:33, when Logan hits the rock the sound effect is just not strong enough. Apart from that, most of the sound design is well done.
There are a few editing problems too: Sometimes, a character would change the pose right in between shots, like on 11:11.
Despite those minute mistakes, I like what you've created and I can't wait to see more. I wish you best of luck.